Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The era we are living in is the time for information, the most powerful nations are the one with most information in science, technology and many other aspects of life. This specifying material impacts extremely the lives of the human, thus the quality of the information increase in value. Different sources of news lead to a high quality level of information as they make the information authentic, encomplete each other and provide different points of views.
First, it is crucial for a well-informed character to obtain flawless information. There are tremendous volume of data about a fact in the world most of which may be not correct. By collecting information from different news resources the reality of a specific fact will be revealed.
Second, as each source of news does not provide a complete information regarding different subjects or even a complete information regarding a specific matter, a well-informed person need to complete the information by following different source of news.
Third, it is obvious that each resource has its' own point of view that affects the concept of the real phenomenon. In order to find different points of view and judge better about some issues, it is better to obtain information from different news resources. For example, a person who wants to buy a specified car has to talk to at least two groups of people who are in favor of that car and who criticize the characteristics of it. In such situation he will be completely aware of the aspects of what he is fronting and have the best decision.
In conclusion, it is better to obtain information from different news sources in order to have reliable, complete and true information about a subject. This helps people be profound about any subject they follow from current political news to the material they want to buy in near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, second, so, then, third, thus, well, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95161290323 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90215930232 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493548387097 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.392388829 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320565542471 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117872543625 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890484104357 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194062788162 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495295770654 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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