TPO 52 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of the new century, with the development of humans is a modern society, more and more people tend to explore new things, specifically, young people. Actually, people's attitudes toward this issue are varied from person to person. Although many would argue that the claim that those rules are too stringent. In my opinion, that rules are vital for the youngsters, and I am one of them. I would suggest two reasons based on my general facts in addition to my personal experiences to support the argument.
In the first aspect to point out is that no one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that in today's sophisticated world we live in; Although, nowadays, all the young learner to use a technology and they can doing anything in the world, except if listening to their parents. Many benefits quickly stem from the rules parents to us in our life. the rules are the most important part of our lives. the efficiency of a society is measured by a degree and the quality of its rules. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what has elaborated above. Take an example a young people fresh graduate from his university and he searches a long time to the job, but the end he didn't find any opportunity to work at any company, definitely, he feels disappointed in life. If he couldn't respect the social rules and also their parent's rules it is possible to steal to gain a lot of money; Furthermore, he must esteem these principles in his society to protect him for any mistakes.
Secondly, rules are omnipresent in our daily life. Admittedly, basics are a great teacher to build character. I still affirm the same idea because there is no guarantee that the rules are too stringent for the undergraduate but that they become safe and to be in a good psychological and physical health. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I remember when I was in university my parents usually to asked me about my health to reassure to avoid the bad friends due to he worries about me to drink a drags; moreover, I'm graduated from my university without any smoking or drinking Alcohols. All of it be brought about by my parent rules to protected me from any dangers.
As you can see, based on the argument above, I strongly believe that the rules are very important to anyone in society. no matter in family, schools or society, are necessary and should be obeyed by young people. Only rule-abiding citizens are capable of living a secure and prosperous life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60045146727 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65836985338 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553047404063 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4673151411 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0476190476 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0952380952 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145106239743 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410797090764 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0182122882887 0.0737576698707 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860580704905 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265055422193 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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