TPO 9 - Independent writing - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology is transferring our daily lives and businesses. We have become very skilled at harnessing technology in all sorts of creative ways. However, there is a debate on the effect of technology on children’s creativity. To the extent that my personal point of view is concerned, I am of the conviction that children have become less creative than the past.
First, children who play electronic games a lot, have no time for thinking. After a while, they become addicted to electronic games and put all of their time on them. Even they play with their tablets in bed before sleeping. As a result, they will have no time for thinking. Thinking is the origin of creativity, so children who use electronic games a lot, have difficulties in concentration and are less creative.
Additionally, in the past children used to play with each other. There was not enough equipments for their entertainment. Hence, they had to be creative and develop their own games. They played with the simplest things, but they played the most amazing games. Besides, sometimes they draw painting with each other. It is proved by the scientists that drawing is one the best ways of increasing creativity.
Finally, technology has helped us in many aspects of our lives. It makes everything easier, but is it not necessary a good thing for children. In the past, children used to deal with some problem that they do not exists today. Take my mother as an example, she had to help his father in feeding the cattle and in farm when she was about seven. She tells that she had created some wooden equipments that helps her in feeding their cattle. It is obvious that for dealing with problems made children more creative.
To sum up, technology has made children less creative because it takes their time for thinking, opportunities to play creative games with their friends and the chance of dealing with problems on their own. There is no doubt that parents must limit their children’s access to technology and follow up their mind growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'exist'?
Suggestion: exist
...deal with some problem that they do not exists today. Take my mother as an example, sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, so, while, no doubt, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88695652174 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73071477687 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51884057971 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2043454097 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3043478261 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224043632451 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708693245684 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573965216355 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131106518686 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257109654914 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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