TPO14-Task2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today, people undergo the rapid change of their surroundings and also the stress of their daily works. Therefore, they need to relieve their stress by traveling to new places at certain times. When it comes to selecting the location of the trip, controversy surrounds the idea of whether people should choose their own country or far-off countries. I believe that people should experience seeing their home country rather than in foreign countries. I will elaborate on my rationale in the following paragraphs.
For one thing, people can contribute to the domestic economy by traveling to the cities in their own country. The local finance can be benefited from these trips in a way that the whole country’s monetary issues can be solved by attracting visitors from nearby cities. By this means, the government can stop allocating the unnecessary budget to that region because they can earn money by themselves. The government can allocate the budget for the needy areas instead.
Another essential thing to be mentioned is that traveling to domestic destinations can contribute to the development of transportation. If people visit one city, its residents or the government will try to improve the ways to reach that destination. Take my city, for example. I live in the coastal town, where there is no means to travel to the nearby villages with the exotic environment. Visitors came to the villages by some young people showing the beautiful atmosphere of the village by Instagram. However, today, thanks to the visitors call to the government by twitter, there are many efficient transportation means to our city and the nearby villages.
However, visiting foreign countries can widen our horizons by seeing their culture, people, and living styles. By traveling to developed countries, we can not only experience their religion but can exert the efficient methods they use to live a better life. This can open our mind to deliver the new techniques for the development of our society or the improvement of our daily life. Take our scientists, for instance. The government sent its adept scholars to the far-off developed countries to learn and get the novel innovations. Then, they brought all the things they experienced for our country to help develop the nation.
All in all, traveling to domestic destinations can contribute to the economy of the country as well as helping advance the transportation of that region. However, the advantages of going to foreign countries are, of course not insignificant to be disregarded.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, of course, as well as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18446601942 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90294813596 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507281553398 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7215126363 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8695652174 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9130434783 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95652173913 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191308568271 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565474772895 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505431514286 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11167089231 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511843878938 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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