TPO3
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Do you enjoy getting out and finding new friends? Do you avoid social events? Are you a social butterfly? These are all important questions to ask yourself because no one can turn a blind eye to the significance and influence of finding new friends on every stage of our life. Some people believe that old friends are the most important persons in our life and play a role as our family members such as our brothers and sisters and we should always respect and keep them. On the other extreme of the rope, some believe that finding new friends is crucial for our life because life is analogous to a tortuous way in a mountain in quite a few aspects and new friends can help us conquer many social and economic problems. Although both sides take their own positions, I think the latter group carries more weight. In the following paragraph, I will explain my reasons.
First, new friends can help us discover new dimensions of our life and experience unprecedented challenges. For example, five years ago I met John who studied marketing science at Oxford University and introduced me marketing and economic books and encouraged me to read them. By reading that book, not only could I pass the university entrance exam, but also I could establish a marketing office and create many job opportunities for my hometown's people. I am greatly thankful to John who was an inevitable and crucial juncture in my life and without his guidance, I could not be what I am.
Second, our new friends and I can get around together and discuss different issues. Therefore, we can use their experiments and implement them in our life. I deeply believe that anyone who doesn't want to move on to the next level, want to stay at the same point forever and doesn't want to have new friends, is sentenced to be left behind. Because everyone has a valuable experience that can be important for us and without communicating to other people and finding new friends we can not achieve our goals properly. Actually, the more people we meet the more we increase our knowledge and experience on a variety of topics and issues.
To put everything in a nutshell, a broad lookover the main points and discussion reveal the fact that, making new friends is important as keeping old friends. By meeting new types of people we expose ourselves to new knowledge and it can help us discover new dimensions of life. New friend's experiences can be very important and play a crucial role in our life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: doesn't
... life. I deeply believe that anyone who doesnt want to move on to the next level, want...
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...t to stay at the same point forever and doesnt want to have new friends, is sentenced ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70438799076 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62666723505 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503464203233 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6997487432 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.85 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.65 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205229030389 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739747655647 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057824888264 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141684274016 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782076914706 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.