TPO11
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems.
Today with the galloping rate of science and technology such as computers and internet, we can get various and valuable information and news from different countries easily. Internet as an accessible technology that almost all people can use, has been created many wonderful and unprecedented changes in our lives. Although some people say that the internet provides so much unnecessary information and it will create some problems such as wasting time and electronic crimes, no one can turn a blind eye to the significance of the internet in thriving and blooming societies. I deeply believe that the internet can provide us a lot of valuable information from all over the world. In the following paragraph, I will explain my reasons.
First and foremost, not only can the internet not limit us, but also it helps access many electronic books and articles which are published in all over the world. I would like to support this by giving an example of students who can read different websites and electronic librarians in order to collect various and valuable information about their thesis and assignments. They can see different professors' profile and their research interests and download the related articles and books. Ten years ago the students should go to library and look for their books and articles which they needed and this was very difficult and boring for them; however, today they can sit in their rooms and type their topics about variety of subjects in search engines such as Google and Yahoo and collect the best data and information easily.
Second, the internet can connect people to communicate and see each other, speak about their ideas and share their information and data. This is especially valuable for people who work in different cities or even countries. Actually, the internet makes our life more convenient. With the advent of different social networks and new applications such as Facebook, telegram, and Skype, the universe had been transformed to a small village that everyone can see each other and share his/her knowledge and experience about many issues immediately.
To put everything in a nutshell and broad lookover the main points and discussions reveal the fact that the internet as the most scientific achievement of the 20th century has been developed our world so much so that we can send and receive the data and information less than two or three minutes. Therefore, it is incontrovertibly axiomatic that the internet play crucial role in people's life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 13.8261648746 275% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10218978102 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73358286853 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542579075426 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.9214111202 48.9658058833 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269298108948 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940931348459 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704732640787 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17009161898 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963967151002 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.