In this day and age of modernization, having a successful life has become a major concern for many specially young people who are at the very first journey of their life. This is primary because of the development of technology and the more links stablished between countries and nations all around the world that has made it difficult for individuals to approach their goals in their life. While different people have different ideas and beliefs towards characteristics needed for a successful person, I believe being able to plan and organize is one the most important ones. Throughout the following paragraphs, among the most predominant reasons in support of this contention heightening the accuracy and becoming aware of alternatives will be meticulously scrutinized to advocate this stand point.
To commence with, the first exquisite point to which should be considered here is that nowadays, people have many schedules and works to do. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what has stated. On of my colleagues at university, wanted to apply abroad in order to study in the one of the best universities. To reach this goal he had to manage and organize many things. As an example, Not only he had to submit articles in journals and study hard to gain high marks, but also he had to work to cover his expense at the same time. It is obvious that to build your dream life, especially for young peoples that are in the begging of their life, learning how to plan and organize is of paramount importance.
Another equally noteworthy point to be mention here is that if you look precisely to life of the successful and famous people, you will discover that they were very hardworking and at the same time, they knew how to be well organized and planed.
The other point to be considered is that if one do not have a plan or do not learn how to manage and organize, he/she will definitely fails to catch up his/her things that she/he should have done.
To recapitulate, taking all the aforementioned reasons into account, it could be authentically concluded that from my vantage point, it is necessary for youngsters to have the ability to plan and organize since modern life is so complex that in order to thrive in this modern era you need excessive skills like them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'fail'
Suggestion: fail
...ge and organize, he/she will definitely fails to catch up his/her things that she/he ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly concluded that from my vantage point, it is necessary for youngsters to have t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78787878788 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73711281324 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54797979798 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5978763451 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.846153846 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4615384615 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253692640647 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845677611869 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06327579225 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133844841999 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444959642343 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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