TPO53-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The world web of the internet plays a crucial role in modern society. We need the internet for almost everything nowadays, to do banking works, knowing about news and announcements, research and study, and so on. Now, the question is which one should be more important for the government to invest, improving internet access or public transportation. To answer it, we should think about the relationship between them. How they are related to and affect each other because both are so important.
In my opinion, I agree with the statement. I am going to give my reasons in the following paragraph.
To begin with, I think to take sides in this situation, we should consider another side too. So in my mind, spending more money on internet access does not make a problem for people to use public transportation. How? It will compensate for it! When people do a lot of their works through improved internet, there is less need to use public transportation. To make it more clear, I have an example. Since I and my parents pay our bills by the internet or other banking stuff like that, we do not go to the bank anymore (or maybe just sometimes).
Moreover, the internet is a great area to research and learn new things, and it will affect on the improvement of public transportation indirectly! Students and university faculties use the internet a lot, especially in engineering. I learned a lot of concepts and lessons on it and passed so many online courses there. And it is wondering that one of these courses was about smart vehicles. Lots of students like me learn this subject online. So you can guess! It can help to improve the public transportation system in the future, by these engineers.
Finally, we all know the internet has huge benefits in our lives. I just mentioned those that were related to the topic. And for these reasons, I think the government should spend money on it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, may, moreover, so, i think, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73716012085 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80708063986 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552870090634 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0521443583 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308197823546 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808678191603 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808713130726 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154607230541 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387575936732 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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