TPO6
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Human beings, by nature, seek ways to improve their lives. It comes as no surprise that efforts to finding the comfort of life in the past and today have been always among the top priorities. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether today's life is more comfortable than in the past or not. I, to a great extent concur with the idea that today's life is more convenient than in the past. The rationale behind this thesis will be elaborated by the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point that makes me hold this belief is that nowadays, advance technologies facilitate our lives and people are more convenient than in the time our grandparents lived. It goes without saying that in today's world, many tools and equipment are prepared for human being to use them. In the past, they used to work hard with dangerous equipment, but today, many machines facilitate their works. As my grandfather said, in the past, he obliged to harvest entire farm field with his hands. But nowadays, thanks to advancement of technology, there are many machines that facilitate our works, therefore, we do not need to work really hard as our grandparents in the past.
Another reason deserving some words here is that the communicational tools make our life much easier than in the past. In the past, there were not so many cars like today and people had to travel with animals or by their feet. Only a special class of people could afford to buy and use car. But today, there are various kinds of communicational tools like different cars, train, airplane, to name but a few. As my father said, He was student in a school in another village. He and his classmates obliged to walk about 20 kilometers to commute from their village to school. Conversely, in today's world, there are many communicational tools which students can use and go to their schools.
Finally, yet importantly, today's life is much easier than in the past since the economic conditions of people are flourished in the past decades. By increasing the number of industries and huge breakthroughs in this area, not only are many more jobs available for people than in the past, but also their income has increased surprisingly. So, they can afford to buy many thing for their comfort. Consider a young person who wanted to find a job in the past. He did not have many choices for getting a decent job. He either had to work in agricultural fields, or herding. But a young person in today's world has a plethora of choices to consider for his employment. He can work in places from restaurant to companies to start his own business. Huge breakthroughs make various kind of jobs for people.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned paragraphs, one can soon realize that today's life is much more convenient than in the past since not only are there many tools which facilitate our life, but also better communicational tools and people's economic condition make life easier than in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
... great extent concur with the idea that todays life is more convenient than in the pas...
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Line 7, column 367, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...urprisingly. So, they can afford to buy many thing for their comfort. Consider a young per...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...d paragraphs, one can soon realize that todays life is much more convenient than in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, if, really, regarding, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2492.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 517.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82011605416 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72220196118 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471953578337 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6638943643 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2962962963 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1481481481 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.37037037037 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177246720153 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487855460755 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492068073037 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111985554518 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296418097005 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.