In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today
It is critically important that we understand how cars will be used in twenty years.Personally, I believe in the future there will be many more cars. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with the developing world is rapidly urbanazing, which means in the future we will more people driving to workplaces. My family experience is a compelling illustration of this. When my parents got married they had a car ,but as years went by they wanted to have childrens and ended up having twins and buying one more car for my mom. It was easier for them to have one more car and less stressful. I can see how much it affects the daily transportations.
Secondly,incomes are rising all over the world, which means that in the future automobiles will be more affordable for even more people. In the past,owning a car was a privilege only for those with a lot of money. At the moment is normal to buy a car in every single country.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that in the future there will be more vehicles on the road than there are today. This is because of the rapidly urbanizing of today’s world, and because rising incomes will open up even more markets for automobile companies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 221.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60180995475 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83382217245 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561085972851 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0062129424 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276096800886 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09308982671 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947425186682 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176509795627 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758543745584 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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