Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet.
It is critically iportant that students use the best available resources when they do researches.Personally,I believe that printed materials are better than using the Internet. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with,printed materials such as books, newspapers are more reliable than websites. This is because the content on websites can be edited and can not be trusted. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. When I was in high school, I was assigned to do a research in a biology class and reliaed heavily on intenet conten. The information there was wrong and I received a low grade in the class, causing me to fail the assignment. If I had taken the time to do some research on books thing would be definetly different.
Secondly,books are superior to online articles because they cover topics in much detail. Textbooks are more useful to students ,they go through a process of evaluation before being published for the students.They are highly recommended by professors and teachers in every single area.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that printed information is more useful than online resources. This is because books and articles are less likely to contain erroes, and because books provide a superior level of details.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 215.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1023255814 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12142580892 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5702821699 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4166666667 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308976490101 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951887206168 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956552811044 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174057163032 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783963828794 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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