in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
while some believe that there will be fewer cars in use than there are today, However, I disagree with this statement for the following reasons that will be further elaborated in the ensuing passage.
firstly, there is no denying that public transportation is crucial for any city especially in crowded cities. Meanwhile, people still view owning a car as an expression of success even when they live in a crowded place. take my personal experience as an example, when I started working in Newyork, Manhattan, I used to take the path train then walk for five minutes to reach my office because it was convenient to me at the time being. However, when I had enough savings, I bought a car of my own because even if it is not as convenient as public transportation but it reflects my progress in my career and my life as well. Not to mention that many people think the way I do. Eventually, there will be more cars in the streets rather than fewer cars.
Moreover, cars companies and the cars stock markets accommodate many jobs and investors who are looking for ways to earn more money. For instance, there were only two companies in the united states who compete in this market, Ford and Mercedes Benz. However, Nowadays we find many other companies that compete to offer the customers the best quality and features. Therefore, people will always aim to this great quality and features that different car companies offer them. As you can see, there will always be car companies and stock markets as long as people seek cars. That's why more cars will be owned by people as much as they find them appealing and provide them with the successful image they are hoping for.
Lastly, privacy is essential to families. This is reflected by having their own house, their own backyard, and consequently their own car. A car of their own is not questionable specifically at times of emergency and holidays. obviously, if one of the family members had a medical emergency, there won't be enough time or required health to walk to the bus station and use public transportation. that's why owning a car that is available at any time is a must-get luxury by anyone who can afford it. Clearly, there will always be more cars in the streets rather than fewer cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68686868687 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57219004278 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505050505051 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0581951527 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6842105263 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297028622548 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099951825792 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125884816855 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221239375437 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115016522423 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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