In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Automobiles are the best invention happened in human history. It has changed people life a lot. Having car is a necessity than a luxury. I believe that in twenty years there will be more cars than today. I will elaborate my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, in developed countries, people are already dependent upon cars for their day to day activity. Even one car is insufficient for a family. Modern parents are more active, and they prefer to enhance extracurricular activities for their kids. So, they need car to drop their kids to school and other after school classes. Once the kids start studying in universities, they need their own cars. So, these basic requirements are increasing the demand for cars. Furthermore, in developing countries the economic growth has been increasing faster than ever before. Just few decades ago, having a car was a symbol of a luxury. But today anyone can buy a car because it is available at reasonable price.
Second, advancement in technologies are giving birth to many fuel efficient and safer cars. Also, improved safety measures reduced numbers of accidents. The better condition and wide roads are increasing the durability of cars. Hence people are more opting for private cars, as it gives the convenience to reach at their destination with more flexibility. They don't need to depend upon private transportation. Moreover, travelling in their own cars provide people an extra family time for enjoyment.
Lastly, most of countries are economically stable so they are enhancing their infrastructure to accommodate more vehicles on the roads. On other side, there is a lake of public transportation. For example, many states in the US don't have well-developed public transportation systems. A car is the only mode of transportation for Americans in many areas.
Let's put in a nutshell, I believe that in twenty years cars will be more than today. It provides flexibility so that people do not have to depend on the public transportation schedules. It also provides comfort and safety. So, more cars will be needed and this on the road in next twenty years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fuel seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much fuel', 'a good deal of fuel'.
Suggestion: much fuel; a good deal of fuel
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05428571429 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98030131335 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548571428571 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9729190059 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.1785714286 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17857142857 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196605718611 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587006930617 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104820858547 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139356232811 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119091516354 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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