Choosing a subject plays an important role in our university life. Some people prefer to major in whatever subject they are interested in, while other individuals decide to learn subjects with a fast job growth even if they are not interested. I believe that it is better to concern more about the career prospect of the subjects they learn. The passage will be listing the facts to illustrate why I think the latter way is better.
There are so many reasons that justify why people should major in a subject with a bright career path. And making lots of money in the future is one of them. In fact, making money is the reason why many people want to study and get a job. My friend Amy who do not like math but studied accounting. She told me that even she hates her major and her job. But she does enjoy her salary. And she does not regret her decision at all.
Furthermore, even people might not interest in their major, does not mean that they will not like the job. This specific argument is particularly important for my essay. For example, my mom studied medicine in university. The courses are so difficult and learning them are painful for her. But she did enjoy her career as a doctor. This job means a lot to her. And she did not regret her decision as well.
Last but not least, people can always do whatever they truly enjoy in their free time. For instance, I like to dance, but it is not necessary that I study it in university. I can learn how to dance online and practice it when I am free. In this way, I do not have the learning pressure in school, so actually I can enjoy myself more.
To draw a conclusion, I firmly agree that students should learn subjects with a fast job growth, due to they can earn more money in the future, interest of major and a job is not relevant and students can do what they really enjoy in their free time. This is why I think so.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, really, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31267605634 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27185150572 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47323943662 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3008511542 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7916666667 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7916666667 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347928128488 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865003643445 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120627125055 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211061269052 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134994740904 0.0645574589148 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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