A university plan to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture. Which one do you recommend?
A university is an academic center the main responsibility of which is to prepare students for having both a successful professional and personal life. In fact, university form a fundamental part of a person's education and make students decide their path. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that university should expend and improve its activities in business. Others, on the other hand, take a radically different point of view and allege that it's better for university to spend time in developing agriculture researches. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, it is established beyond doubt that human beings need organic and healthy foods in order to lead a healthy lifestyle. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that agriculture is responsible for providing the community with food and supporting some industries. For my country, there is no persistent conflict in providing food. Indeed, no conflicts exist regarding the necessary water supply. Scientifically speaking, researches in agriculture will produce new generations of crops that consume less water, produce more nourishment, resist diseases or require fewer pesticides. Delving further into the issue reveal that we must provide new jobs to increase the income of families and supply them with adequate fund that will motivate the economy wheel. This attitude will result in more purchases and the necessity for increasing agricultural production will arise. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that research in agriculture provide fertile ground for the country to produce more nourishing foods and in case of economic it will recover the country from recession.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that the more research in agriculture, the more land for farming. Broadly speaking, as humans living in civilized society, we all need a well-paid job in order to flourish in our everyday lives. This concept has played a dominant role in individuals' way of living throughout history. In fact, research in agriculture will provide many jobs opportunity in every society. To put it in other word, not only can agriculture be beneficial for people in case of careers and health but also can patronize country in cycle of economy. Indeed, agriculture can contribute greatly to the progress of country. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, business research center are really rare and the expansion of business research center will help majorities of students to continue their education and reach their pinnacle of their life. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, widespread research in agriculture or in business has its own merits and drawbacks. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that more research in agriculture will resulted in more organic production that people can take advantage of those products. In addition, research in agriculture will provide an opportunity for people to find a decent job, which indirectly help the economic recession.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...university form a fundamental part of a persons education and make students decide thei...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
... that more research in agriculture will resulted in more organic production that people ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...indirectly help the economic recession.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256944444444 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.157986111111 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0954861111111 0.0866891130778 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0451388888889 0.046263068375 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0381944444444 0.0685040099705 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130208333333 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0451388888889 0.0351676179071 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02473812135 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277777777778 0.0309702414327 90% => OK
Particles: 0.00173611111111 0.00188951952338 92% => OK
Determiners: 0.0833333333333 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0295138888889 0.0209618222197 141% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104166666667 0.0139019557991 75% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3383.0 2387.08602151 142% => OK
No of words: 524.0 408.028673835 128% => OK
Chars per words: 6.45610687023 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.43320610687 0.338922669872 128% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.353053435115 0.251872472559 140% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.274809160305 0.174417080927 158% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.179389312977 0.112833075102 159% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02473812135 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534351145038 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 65.6406538642 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.96 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3447419743 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.32 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.96 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 56.2653435115 45.7405998639 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.79136690647 1.45489161554 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30877539134 0.300154397459 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101492331035 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0596997101642 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.442958389328 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137615066884 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109260656618 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719289243686 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.476505075338 0.336927656856 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0549985563221 0.067059652881 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239088793357 0.210909579961 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619820679229 0.0618886996521 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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