A university recognized first-year students have poor
study skills in its university. Some in the university believe the best way to address this is to ask all first year students have to pass course on study skills. Others don't agree with this requirement. What is your opinion?
One of the most controversial subject in education sesctor is pertinent to learnig methods to learn studying materials in-depth. Learning strategy and methods is very improtant for student for every levels of education particularly for higher education in University. Some education adminstrators are on the opinion that student should learn learning methods by self-motivation without any mandatory course in the first year of college. On the other hands, others belives that it is crucial to learn learning methods throuhg assingned course by obligation in the first year of study in university. Form my perspective, i firmly agree with latter opinion since of two main reasons and I will elaborate my viewpoint for the following paragraphs.
The most nothworthy point to mention regarding the learning subjects by mandatory course is that the most student did not have enough self-motivation to learn study skills by their own. On the other hand, some of them do not access to learning this methods in the past or some of the students may be they were belived that they have enough knowledge regarding this subject but not sufficient or even worse ineffective at the right direction. Therefore, the university directors should address this problems by introduction studying course for the freshmans by mandatory requirments to fullfill needs. Tp put in more vivid picture, this course will lead the students to learnig subjects and studying materials suring their education by hearts and efficient time which will propser their education in student's career in the future.
The seconds reasons worth to points out that higher education and university education may be not familar for some of the students and they can not adapt themself to the right circumstance to learn subjects. Moreover, the majority of courses in the student's chart are very overhelming to handel without enough and modern knowledge regarding studying skills. as a result, It is better meet and train thorugh experienced tutors to learn appropriate skills to overcome heavy assignements and studying course.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to study'.
Suggestion: to study
...s pertinent to learnig methods to learn studying materials indepth Learning strategy and...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to learn'.
Suggestion: to learn
...n the opinion that student should learn learning methods by selfmotivation without any m...
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Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to learn'.
Suggestion: to learn
...ers belives that it is crucial to learn learning methods throuhg assingned course by obl...
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Line 2, column 735, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y viewpoint for the following paragraphs The most nothworthy point to mention reg...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to study'
Suggestion: to study
...not have enough selfmotivation to learn study skills by their own On the other hand ...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation to learn study skills by their own On the other hand some of them do not a...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir own On the other hand some of them do not access to learning this methods i...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...some of them do not access to learning this methods in the past or some of the stud...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...ods in the past or some of the students may be they were belived that they have enough...
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Line 3, column 824, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ucation in students career in the future The seconds reasons worth to points out ...
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ersity education may be not familar for some of the students and they can not adapt themsel...
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Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...studying skills as a result It is better meet and train thorugh experienced tutor...
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Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
...ain thorugh experienced tutors to learn appropriate skills to overcome heavy assignements a...
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Line 4, column 502, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e heavy assignements and studying course
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, of course, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27963525836 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80064755402 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483282674772 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 329.0 20.1344086022 1634% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1737.0 100.406767564 1730% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 329.0 20.6045352989 1597% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 102.0 5.45110844103 1871% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309141789334 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.309141789334 0.076458572812 404% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218535733312 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418511375599 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 167.9 11.7677419355 1427% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -262.46 58.1214874552 -452% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 131.6 10.1575268817 1296% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.82 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.6 8.01818996416 294% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 10.002688172 630% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 133.6 10.0537634409 1329% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 10.247311828 615% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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