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vacationing individually or with a group led by tour guide

Traveling is one of the most widely enjoyed recreations. The tourist business is becoming increasingly important for many counties’ economies and provides a great products and services. People are difference and so are their preferences when it comes to vacation traveling to interesting and exotic places. One the first choices one should make when planning trip is whether it would be individual or with a group led by tour guide. If it were up to me, I would go to trip as a part of a tourist group.
First of all, a common problem of people traveling to unfamiliar place is the language of the place they are visiting. A major inconvenience as it could hamper their communication and prevent them from learning valuable things about the place. That’s way I think tour guide, who in most cases knows at least two languages, would be needed. For example, last year I went with my family to Dubai and Turkey; the trip was led by a traveling agency who took as to first to the most famous tower in the Dubai which was Al kalifa tower, then to Atlantic water city, it was shore trip but it was worth it. Add to that we could communicate with native people effectively through our tour guide and enjoyed their traditional food. As we have seen, tour leader is the best way to know about new places.
Second, group journeys are supposed to be previously organized. The travel agency makes the full program for the trip: hotel reservations, transportation and food. Furthermore, many services and museum taxes are cheaper for a whole group. In this way, tourists are much more comfortable, as they save time and money, and are able to enjoy their vacation without worrying about anything. Let’s take my vacation to Dubai, first I was lucky by the tourist company that I chose, their responsibility stated from the first step I made in the airport until my back to home. Thanks to the travel agency that made my trip covenant and comfortable with less by 50% offer than I expected. Therefore, people can make a great trip wherever they want if they made the right decision about traveling.
In conclusion, while there are many benefits of individual vacationing, but the advantage of being a part of tour guided trip far outweigh the disadvantage. This is because people can on contact with native people of the visiting country and they can learn a lot about their culture, and they can get a convenient deal with tourist companies.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...convenient deal with tourist companies.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, therefore, while, as to, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in most cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75471698113 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68047407379 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530660377358 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4767311427 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239272206208 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639249214723 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700506973293 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147579286749 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429736058136 0.0645574589148 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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