What do you think about abortion?
The continuing development of technology and medicine have made possible that human can plan their life according their wishes and dreams. Having children in a proper environment is always one of those dreams that many couples have to start building a family. Raising a child carry many factors like a home and the possibility of give them an education and nurture, just like the mental capacity of the mother and father to give them the love they deserve. For this reason, I think the abortion is a completely correct option to the couples who do not believe it is the perfect time or they have the conditions to raise a baby. I will hereunder be stating my arguments in the next paragraphs.
Firstly, this option that the breakthrough of medicine has given us makes possible for a couple avoid raising a child without the conditions built. It is not a secret all the attention and the comfort that is needy to raise a kid properly. Abortion has made possible that many children do not have to undergo hardships for being born without all the supplements he/she deserves. Many years ago, this fact, caused that many children were forsaken in fosters because the parents could not afford to raise them.
Furthermore, many psychologists say that abortion is an understandable option for people when the child is susceptible to be raised without the love of their parents. For a person, growing as a no-desired child is always a trauma in their life. It is not a secret that many births are caused by the negligence of young individuals or for an “accident”. Most of these, causes that the parents have to stop of pursuing their dreams to raise the kid, most of time, building a feeling of guilt and rejection toward the innocent child who has to grow up with this trauma.
For all those reasons I think that abortion is so important today to avoid a child being raised passing through all this. It has been demonstrated that many offenders have grown in families which could not give them the love and the proper nurture as a family when they were children. By this fact, they were raised with feeling like hatred and anguish making them what they are now. It is not a secret that the personality of an individual is a result of what they saw and underwent in their childhood.
To sum up, abortion is very important nowadays when we want to build a family. It makes possible that a child can be raised with the proper environment and the love they deserve to grow up as a human being.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'as to', 'i think', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204592901879 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.198329853862 0.158761421928 125% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0751565762004 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0375782881002 0.046263068375 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.062630480167 0.0685040099705 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112734864301 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0605427974948 0.0351676179071 172% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.654554881 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0313152400835 0.0309702414327 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0062630480167 0.00188951952338 331% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.131524008351 0.0887237588012 148% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104384133612 0.0209618222197 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0208768267223 0.0139019557991 150% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2507.0 2387.08602151 105% => OK
No of words: 442.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67194570136 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.307692307692 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219457013575 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14479638009 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0859728506787 0.112833075102 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.654554881 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438914027149 0.524397521467 84% => OK
Word variations: 48.0404856601 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2631578947 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7084421064 48.84282405 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.947368421 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2631578947 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.421052631579 0.644075263715 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 45.2088592522 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.26573426573 1.45489161554 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.054787404566 0.300154397459 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0927525318282 0.103427244359 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0448237849693 0.0752933317313 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532803395516 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120568285142 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257398053961 0.114077575197 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037533096133 0.0781384742642 48% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.408652856486 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0683320347519 0.067059652881 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.041035799164 0.210909579961 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218040424903 0.0618886996521 35% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
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Make sure the topic is correct.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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