Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
People are always looking for a way to enjoy at top their vacations, and traveling is one of the best options. But, what is the best manner to exploit at most our travel? Some individuals debate that being led by a tour guide is the best. However, other group thinks that traveling alone and visiting all parts of the city they wish without somebody else choosing for them is the most satisfying. I agree with the first ones, going on a journey with a tour guide makes the visit more pleasant and worthwhile. I will hereunder be explaining my arguments.
Firstly, traveling in groups is more enjoyable. Through the tour we can meet new people, many of them from different countries and sow new friendships. Besides, passing time in a group meeting the city and learning new cultures undoubtedly avoids getting bored. Enjoying the company together with the charm of the place makes an unforgettable travel. On the contrary, traveling alone can make in some point the visit a little bored without someone to share the happy moments who.
Secondly, the guidance shows the better places of the city and tells us about its history and the culture of the citizens. I remember when I visited Cuba, the guide showed us popular restaurants and historical places, telling us about their past. Cuba has a history in every nook, and it is very interesting to know about them, that is why a tour leader was so suitable. It helps when we want to enrich us culturally in our travel. On the other side, traveling alone with just a guide book is not that exciting, we can pass hours finding the most popular places and asking for directions. Moreover, if you are a curious person you will want to learn about every place.
On the other hand, traveling alone is more comfortable when we want to relax and rest from the stress caused by the job and people. People also like to travel alone because they want to meet, not only the popular places, but how the citizens live too. It is true that the tour guide just shows to the tourist the famous places. When I visited Cuba those ones were The Cathedral of Havana and Vedado; the most remotes and poorest sites are less visited by tourist due the poor publicity they have. There is where you can really see the culture and traditions of the townsfolk.
In short, I rather travel with a group because the company makes it funnier and I meet new people. Also, the tour guide shows me the popular sites of the city and I learn a lot about their history too. I enjoy more in that way and I make unforgettable memories.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.188118811881 0.229887763892 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.168316831683 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0891089108911 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0693069306931 0.046263068375 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0772277227723 0.0685040099705 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10099009901 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.049504950495 0.0351676179071 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.38052654236 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.019801980198 0.0309702414327 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.120792079208 0.0887237588012 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0118811881188 0.0209618222197 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0178217821782 0.0139019557991 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2558.0 2387.08602151 107% => OK
No of words: 458.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58515283843 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.272925764192 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211790393013 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.113537117904 0.174417080927 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0807860262009 0.112833075102 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38052654236 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493449781659 0.524397521467 94% => OK
Word variations: 56.1532975211 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.32 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7132377561 48.84282405 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.32 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.32 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.72 0.644075263715 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 39.4990393013 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.07547169811 1.45489161554 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424744620693 0.300154397459 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0868529614096 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0658742661208 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49040060732 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137538313626 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160746856028 0.114077575197 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747642921531 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.437609685024 0.336927656856 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0713766599343 0.067059652881 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30507736411 0.210909579961 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494466715416 0.0618886996521 80% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
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Rates: 86 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26 Out of 30
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