What is the most important action for the government to take for the protection of environmental
problems?
-fund researches on new energy sources such as solar and wind power;
-protect forests and natural wildlife species;
-pass and enforce laws to reduce the pollution.
With the quality of our life improved, more and more attention are paid to the issues of environment. Some researchers are trying to look for some new energy sources, while some are fighting for the protection of the forests and natural wildlife species. On my opinion, however, passing and enforcing laws aiming to reduce the pollution is the predominent action for government to take to keep a beautiful planet for us.
To begin with, funding researches on new energy sources like solar and wind power costs too much and may takes a long time. Doing researches requires advanced equipments and plenty of elites in these area. A sum of money is going to be paid for the acquisition and the compensation. Besides, risks should also be taken into consideration when doing scientific researches. Actually it will take a long time and sometimes come to nothing. For example, Nanjing government invested 500 million in a green program by Nanjing University in 2007. Unfortunately nothing achieved after ten years' effort. In this way, protecting environment by fund researches on new energy sources is not profitable way.
What's more, solving the pollution is the prerequisite of the preservation of the forests and natural wildlife species. To illustrate, fish and other marine life are very vulnerable to pollution, waste runoff, and other serious problems that threaten their habitat. What people dump every day like paint, medications and other chemicals into a drain or outside can actually get into runoff that goes directly into rivers and streams. These chemicals are hazardous to marine animals and plants. Also trash left on the beach can also be dangerous. Turtles see plastic as their prey and it can cause them to suffocate or choke. So when the pollution is controlled by the law, the forest and wild animals can be protected.
Last but not least, people's awareness of protecting our environment can be reinforced by passing and enforcing the laws to reduce the pollution. Laws force people to comply with the regulations included. If there is not an law concerning pulltion, many conscienceless factories continue to dump the waste and chemistry casually, leaking toxic fumes into the air, cutting down trees in the forests without limitations, etc since they only cares about their benefits. Finally our planet will get worse and worse.
In conclusion, what government ought to do in the first place is to pass and enforce the law to reduce the pollution - an rudimentary issue in dealing with the protection of the environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1175059952 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80042905202 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565947242206 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0722197343 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7826086957 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1304347826 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17391304348 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373733125939 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825941850977 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09765606458 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197140432328 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10461984834 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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