When a new technological device becomes available some people buy it right away others wait until many have adopted it Which view do you agree with
Nowadays, due to the cutting-edge development of technology, the newest electronic product always contain the most powerful functions which can make people employ it to handle many arduous tasks. Nonetheless, some people may argue that newest devices may contain some drawbacks which have not been discovered yet. In my perspective, purchasing the digital product opportunely have plenty of benefits.
First and foremost, people can enjoy the high quality functions given by the original product. They can also utilize it to improve their work efficiency. For example, the newest version of iPhone have the function of high resolution camera and high quality communication system. If YouTubers can use the iPhone to make their video, their video will be extremely marvelous because different from the video produced by older camera its resolution functions can make the image astonishing and the sound in the video may also become clear. These high quality videos can make them procure reputation, which in turn give them more opportunity to earn money from big company’ investment.
In addition, all of those functions can replace other outdated devices, which means that possesses one device can save much money by reducing the spending on several other poor devices. For instance, the newest computer can directly used to run the advance software which require the old computers to add other external devices such as hard disk. Maybe the gross of the cost about those two products have already transcended the price of that new computer. Besides, the quality of its functions are much better, which means that people who buy the electronic device opportunely can procure the best quality in lower price.
To sum up, people who purchase the new technology device can use it to accomplish their work and earn money from it. Furthermore, people will actually save much money by the virtue of curtailing the spending on other poor product. It is evident that buying the original digital product have more merits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, first, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24382716049 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58386796244 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5153002125 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.266666667 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165876038246 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630128487266 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419938295794 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11882021278 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493344915139 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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