When a new technological device becomes available, some people buy it right away; others wait until many have adopted it. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Using the last updated electronic devices is one of the most important pillars for each society in today's world. Due to the fact we live in a fast-paced and chaotic world, it is necessary for us to use facilities that make our lives easier. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether people should buy a new technological device just right after release, or whether they should wait until many adapt to it. Some people possess the conviction that the former is more agreeable whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter is more fruitful. I am personally content that this issue is multifaceted. However, I think using the last updated and new devices have some drawbacks for us. To substantiate my point of view the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my standpoint is that these devices are expensive at first. As prices rose dramatically nowadays it is hard for people to afford their lives, so buying such expensive devices seems inappropriate decisions. Consider the Apple mobile phone as a general example to make this point more clear. Evert time Apple announces and releases its last products it is expensive. In particular, in my country due to the fact that we need to consider the dollar exchange rate and transportation tariffs, we need mass and huge money to buy its products.
The second rationale reason behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that these products are just suitable for a certain area and environment and everyone can not use them. Consider my personal experience. When I bought my first "iPhone" I could not use its options like "iMessage" to sent texts to my family or "facetime" to video call with them. In this regard, I had to use devices and applications that my family had too.
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I think it is wise to wait and after that buy new devices.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, i think, in brief, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94658753709 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04578845346 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557863501484 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5232553977 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0588235294 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189369263132 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053180067669 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489211696111 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10580159688 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516145864015 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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