When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details.
Considering the essay topic to follow the new country's customs or keep the own customs, I strongly incline to take the side of the keeping the own customs. Being one of most proliferated known social issue in the movement to the new country, the adaptation or conflict between the host customs or guest own customs are always implied as a critical subject for both the country's people and migrants. It goes without saying that any mutation in the human psychological and sociological characteristics can be implied as a favorable or an unfavorable event. Besides, there are many cultural preferences in preserving some own customs. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, as pointed out in the introduction, the most people who moved to the new country have a great tendency to follow their own customs even for a temporal period. This derives from the intrinsic nature of all human beings that will resist to new unknown conditions. I implied this subject as unrecognized conditions because the effects of any custom acceptance on the psychological characteristics of human beings will be shown in long term periods. The guest people can accept some custom which have negative psychological effects on their life. For instance, if living autonomously for single unmarried girls are recognized as a custom of the new country, for some inexperienced migrated girls this may be contributed as a harmful decision.
Another important reason to support this idea that keeping the own customs has much more preference compared to match with new customs, is strongly related to the identification of the people. For instance, in the United States, there are several societies from different parts of the world such as Asia, Spain, etc that keep their cultures and their customs since they have migrated. The Chinese neighborhood in the New York can be attributed as a good example of this reason. Needless to say, the main cause of keeping their previously own customs can be contributed to the contemplation of the guest people to preserve numerous cultural merits. They want to keep their own customs because their are recognized by their customs which tightly associated with their cultures.
Taking all these perspectives into account, I cannot agree more about the preference of keeping the own customs for the people who make a decision to move to the new country. Regarding the importance of traditional merits in the own culture and the intrinsic nature of humans to reject unfavorable changes, the conflict to accept the host country customs cannot be justified in summary. To my best knowledge, the future sociological investigation to find the perfect explanation plays a crucial role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, for instance, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2326.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16888888889 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92380945487 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484444444444 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.773950754 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.222222222 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316203183298 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10809011079 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825468918339 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205881885021 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463015106989 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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