When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details.
As the world is becoming a shorter planet, people can easily move from one country to another to be a settle immigrant, pursue the higher studies, or visit the natural beauties of a territory. However, the most controversial issue arises in such movement whether people should keep their own culture or follow the custom of the new country. Considering the good sides and downsides, my next sentences will put light on both opinion to find out my preferable way of survival.
First and foremost, when a man travels to abroad, he has to struggle to understand the verbal expressions of native speakers. It leads them to a dilemma to suit there. For this reason, he must be predetermined that he should adopt the profound language of the new country. Otherwise, he cannot shop his needy goods or may fail to make understand the local people what he wants from them. Moreover, many people go to other countries to have a higher education. In this case, he should be informed about the cultural practices of the university to get the optimum facilities. When my uncle went to the United State to persue his Master program, he had to struggle to comprehend the norms and manners of the native fellow. As a result, he suffered from dwelling crisis, starvations, and even sometimes, he missed the classes due to the lackings of proper understanding. so, for thses cases, one should, of course, need to graspe the culture of the new country.
Secondly, If people can learn the new culture, it will provide him security. There are lots of smugglers, deceivers encompass to the new area, if they can identify that I'm a new one, they can hack my everything. So, laerning new norms and rules is needed for social security.
On the other hand, people might have to suffer to adjust new clothes, ethnic foods, religious of a new state. In these cases, I think they should hold their own rules. As the all spritual values are respected, nobody will face problem on religious issues. Also, Clothes isses also can be recovered.
In conclusion, the aforesaid descriptions show that people need to adopt the new culture for survial and safety. Some sides can be also hold of his own. But most of the thing should be adopt
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: So
...o the lackings of proper understanding. so, for thses cases, one should, of course...
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Suggestion: I'm
...the new area, if they can identify that Im a new one, they can hack my everything....
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Message: Did you mean 'adopted'?
Suggestion: adopted
...is own. But most of the thing should be adopt
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, even so, i think, in conclusion, of course, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76822916667 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60822470279 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565104166667 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3988112178 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2272727273 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04545454545 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195600685029 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529584457295 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505189709392 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106569156224 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518752666405 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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