When people succeed, it is because of hard work, Luck has nothing to do with success.
The success is most actual and debatable topic in current century. Why this topic is so popular? Because everyone wants a success in own field. And not all of us cannot gain success, there a lot of reasons why some of us cannot achieve what we want. Some group of people think that the luck, influence on success while others cost doubt on this statement. They believe, hard work is a key of success, luck has nothing to do with success. As far as I concerned, hard work makes a masterpiece. I will explain why I feel this way right.
Firstly, practice makes perfects, when we hard working that is mean we are practicing. That is give us breathtaking results. An example from famous people’s success: Albert Einshtein, who create a lump, also a successful scientist in 20.century.In order to create a lump he spent almost half of his life time. He fall down in his experiment over and over again. This might be a bad luck when you have tried one thing as a result you have a failure not a success. However if you will try ones again and work on it you can make it. We must just hard work in order to obtain a success. That is a rule of success. When Albert create a lump after 11234 experiments, he showed success connected strongly with hard work not with luck.
Secondly, by hard working we will get great experiences which is second clue of a success. As adage says:” Mistakes increases your experience and experiences decreases your mistakes, then others learn from your success”. When person work on own field after years he or she gets experiences this experiences drives to through to success. Moreover experiences not come so easy, as I proverb mentioned above experiences come after mistakes. When person hard works, he or she absolutely makes mistakes which is he or she gets a lessons from it. My own real experience is good example for this notion. When I was learning, I always make mistakes. That is does not mean I was an awkward student. I had work a lot that is way I make a lot of mistakes, I was stubborn student who never gives up. I worked hard on my mistakes in the test day I was first students who take 100 from 100.That was a success for me. How I achieve it, answer is by hard working on my mistakes as a result I was experienced. Being an experienced student a got 100.There I was not handled with luck. Only due to by hard working I succeed.
All in all, the way of success is only hard work, luck has nothing to do with success. As I write above hard works makes perfects also drives us directly to success .My two examples which I provided above best proves this idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47599164927 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60423497927 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478079331942 0.524837075471 91% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 8.0 0.994623655914 804% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7007402642 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.96875 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09375 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432768599932 0.236089414692 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115218465014 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121741721544 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288861652614 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558492688812 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 10.9000537634 74% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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