“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Nowadays being a successful person is becoming more and more essential than it used to be decades or centuries ago. Some individuals believe that hard work is a key to success, while others suppose that luck takes place in the achievement. I absolutely agree with the first point of view proceeding (from the below mentioned reasons and) my position that becoming succeed is impossible without a character of a person, their qualities, surroundings and background knowledge.
To begin with, an achievement of a goal usually needs from people to be patient and hardworking. What I mean is that ones will be successful if they do not surrender and put best leg foremost in order to accomplish a goal. For example, my friend Alex wanted to become a doctor, but he did not know the biology and had no background in that sphere. The wish and the dream were an engine fostered Alex to study this subject as hard as it was possible. As a result, he graduated from the Harvard University and became an excellent specialist. Thus, success is a reward for people's hard work, belief and hope.
Secondly, I could not help mentioning that surroundings play an essential role of individual's success. It goes without saying that a man is known by the company he keeps. For instance, if a person wants to be an entrepreneur, they should spend their spare time in such companies. The other example, if a woman wishes to become independent from others, she ought to surround herself the same people. Hence, becoming successful depends on surroundings demanding a lot of work in order to be construct.
The last, but not the least, hard work expects from people improvements of themselves such as gaining knowledge and experience. Needless to say that many students after graduating from universities face with catch-22. To be successful, you need a job, to be employment you must have experience. However, those students who made efforts and found, for example, an internship will be onwards and upwards.
To sum up, people's success is effected by their hard-working which requires special qualities, surroundings and background.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i mean, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01699716714 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92376802364 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589235127479 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3235380338 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2105263158 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158858646542 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491988133944 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427063768029 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095016868114 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367355425495 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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