Which of the following do you think contribute most to an enjoyable vacation: 1. good food 2. good location 3. good friends to travel with. Select one and give your reasons.
Vacation what a pleasant word. Is there anybody exist who doesn’t like to have a vacation? All around the world, there are different tastes for spending a vacation and also different factors which determine an enjoyable one. For example, different definition among people distinguishes several criterions such as good food, good location, and good friends for an enjoyable vacation. I personally believe the companionship of good friends will be more helpful than other factors. I will delve into my perspective with three reasons.
First of all, the most important factor in spending a good vacation is fun. Imagine travel with a friend who has the same taste as you, he possibly would make your travel unforgettable. I give myself as an example, I remember I had traveled to a part of my country with one of my new friend that was awful. He just nagging and make our vacation day to a catastrophe. I believe if I had spent that travel with one of my old friends- who knows me well and define as a good friend- I have good memories now!
Second, I as an adventurer believe that friends will be helpful in a journey. Cooperation with friends makes the situation more comfortable. Besides, they can fulfill some related responsibilities as well. So, we can spend time as a vacation in which everybody enjoys that.
Last but not least, is preventing possible annoyance. Let me as a camp fan, take an example for understanding it in depth. Imagine you want to camp in nature with a wild environment. Is it possible for you to camp lonely? Is it safe? Are you sure to be alone? Of course because of possible dangers brain logically avoid something like this. Now, imagine you have a friend who is an adventurer like you. In this situation, you have someone in nature to be with. Which makes it safer and less scarifying.
To sum up all, I personally believe having good friends will be the best way of spending a good vacation. Travel with friends makes the vacation more enjoyable. Besides, cooperation which is happening along the travel brings comfortability for all of us. Moreover, Spend a vacation reduce every possible annoyance too.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, of course, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83739837398 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8429282222 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520325203252 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8733970147 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.75 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1785714286 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10714285714 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3633762981 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830315211379 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828168236733 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20518100879 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865170611599 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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