Which of the following do you think contribute most to an enjoyable vacation: 1.good food 2. good location 3. Good friends to travel with. Select one and give your reasons.
As human beings, we all need to spend some time for ourselves. After one week of hard work, having an enjoyable vacation will help us to reduce our anxieties and keep away job tensions. There are various things that we can do for our vacation such as eat our favorite food, visit a fantastic location that probably we have never been there, or travel with best friends. In my opinion, all of them are interesting to me, but if I have to select just one of them, I prefer to have a travel with my best friends. In what follows, I will elaborate on my point of view.
First of all, travel is one of my favorite hobbies especially if it goes with my friends. This summer, my friends and I had a trip to Shiraz. I have been several times to Shiraz with my family, but none of them has been as enjoyable as my last trip with my friends. Even during the trip on the train, we had an excellent time being with each other. I will never forget all the exciting moments that we had in that trip. Obviously, who you travel with is very important to be someone that you are convenient with. Traveling with someone that you aren’t comfortable with, may result your worst travel.
Second, travel not only is a hobby but also it is one of the best ways to learn new things about other locations and cultures. By travel, you can visit cities or countries that you have never been there before. You can find new things about abroad cultures and their languages. One of my friends had a minor ability in the English language. He had a trip to Canada for a few months. After he came back, I found him speaking English like a native one. In addition, by traveling you can also test new foods. Whenever I visit a new city, I eat at local restaurants to taste local foods. For example, a few months ago, when I was in Gilan for a vacation, I test a local food named Mirzaghasemi. Although I had eaten it before, it had so different and fantastic taste that I thought it is a different dish.
As you can infer from the above reasons, traveling with friends not only is an enjoyable vacation, but also it can be a way to visit new locations and test new good foods. Furthermore, in this way you can share your best times with your best friends. An experience that you never forget for a long time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 480, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
...lect just one of them, I prefer to have a travel with my best friends. In what follows, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32558139535 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38067758078 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46976744186 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4082188523 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.56 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245176275745 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665511115767 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621150599354 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160221096549 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671397098846 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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