Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important for governments to protect wild animals and wilderness areas for the future generations.
Humans have played an important role in the extinction of many species. When I hear a news about the death of the last survivor of a species, I think what would happen for humans if all animals extinct and human is forced to leave alone on the Earth. In my opinion, humans couldn’t survive without other species. Even wild animals are important for us. Unfortunately, in recent years many wilderness areas conquered by humans. It is the responsibility of governments to protect wild animals and their habitats. In the following paragraphs, I’ll describe why governments should invest in protecting wild animals and wilderness areas.
As I mentioned before, we need animals to be alive. Each species play its role in the natural environment. All animals and vegetation are in balance with each other. If one of them disappeared, others are affected. This affection could be extinction or population explosion of other species. For example, extinction of a bird that feeds on a specific insect, causes a population explosion of that insect, because their predator no longer exists and they can reproduce without any problem. Now, if this insect is a pest for our farms, they can destroy all products in a few days or even a few hours.
Another reason to save wild animals concentrated on economic reasons. There are many protected areas in the world. Many people all over the world visit these protected areas to see wild animals in their habitats. Watching animals in a zoo is not as exciting as visiting them in their natural habitats. Animals that live in nature are vivid and full of energy but when they kept in small cages they seem unwell and sick. Therefore, many people prefer to visit them in protected areas. Governments can attract many tourists every year by these protected and wilderness areas.
Considering the above reasons, protecting wild animals and wilderness areas is very important for us and also future generations. Earth without animals would not have any privileges on other planets. We as a human being, have the responsibility of protecting wild nature and its animals for our next generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...extinction of many species. When I hear a news about the death of the last survivor of...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...ed before, we need animals to be alive. Each species play its role in the natural en...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04802259887 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80079154395 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505649717514 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1061367378 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4583333333 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335101040721 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102572266977 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104050483978 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222220790144 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107682680446 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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