Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Universities are exist for more than three hundred years. During this period of time, they have been changed dramatically. In the beginning, they just focused on education but they gradually changed and other activities such as sports and social activities emerged. The question is if these new activities are as important as classic educational activities? In my opinion these activities are as important as classic education activities. In the following paragraphs I try to describe my opinion about this question.
Sports play an important role in our life. Doing exercise help us to reduce stress. There are many reasons that cause students get stressed during their educational period. Exams, thesis and missing families are the main reasons that cause students get stress. Exercise can help students manage and control their tensions. When I was a student in Kerman that is a far city from Tehran I used to think about my family all the day. My family was in Tehran and it wasn’t possible for me to visit them every month. Therefore I decided to play ping pong with one of my roommates in the university’s dormitory. Playing ping pong helped both of us to overcome our homesick problem.
Social activities such as exhibitions and learning foreign languages for newcomers are also very helpful for students. By participating in social activities, students can find new friends and improve their knowledge about the society that they are living there. They can learn many things that usually aren’t accessible through university courses. For example a psychology student cannot learn about local food by reading his/her studying books. But by visiting a food exhibition he/she can acquire a lot of information about local foods, how they cooked, raw materials used in that foods and other information.
Therefore I think that sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries. These activities help students reduce their stress and learn other subjects that they won’t learn by just attending in classical courses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
Universities are exist for more than three hundred years. Duri...
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...e than three hundred years. During this period of time, they have been changed dramatically. I...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ents manage and control their tensions. When I was a student in Kerman that is a far...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...sible for me to visit them every month. Therefore I decided to play ping pong with one of...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...in that foods and other information. Therefore I think that sports and social activiti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29483282675 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80255028792 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544072948328 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2824889206 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1818181818 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9545454545 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141323798039 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485495522092 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489987844458 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946042146189 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357271759915 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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