Which of the following people are in the most need for government financial support: older people who cannot work young families with children unemployed people.
It goes without saying that in this progressive world there are enormous people needing help. There has been a controversial debate among politicians as to which groups living in society need more monetary support. From my perspective, older members in community need financial support, and two reasons to support my view are presented as follows.
To begin with, supporting older people not enabling to work, government can decrease the rate of poverty. It goes without saying that people who do not have any job to earn living are being considered as poor members in society; by increasing the rate of unemployment, county is about to experience poverty which means the majority of citizens will live under the line of poverty. Obviously, young people always have opportunities to find a job being well-paid or not since they have overall health and energy to work, conversely, old people cannot be as productive as youth, so it is governments' responsibility to take care of them in order to prevent county from being fulfill with poor people because old people have worked hard for their countries and now it is their governments' turn to compensate their diligences. For instance, in my country there is a donation for people who cannot work anymore to meet their financial obligations; my grandmother takes the advantage of such donations and she is able to fulfill her ends easily and without worries. Had my country not built donated institution for poor people, my grandmother would not be able to pay the living expenses.
Furthermore, helping older members of society to meet their needs, county is able to make a lot of progress in country such as economic prosperity. It is crystal clear that young people have great potentials and ability to learn new skills and work as well as possible. New generation is so valuable for every society and politicians try to take the advantages of youth to facilitate the way that we are living. But when there are some rules for advocating these useful workforces, young generations will lose their interest in working hard to earn money because they are sure that government supports them which is extremely detrimental for the fate of a country. No longer will countries make progress because their precious capacity that has a lot of ability to keep pace with the development of technology and science are inclined to use their talents and potentials.
In sum, not only will counties be able to escape from the clutches of poverty, they will also witness a lot of developments and progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, so, well, as to, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97887323944 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76985855652 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514084507042 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.8300723374 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.5 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333656798961 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115488041101 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913464225458 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175135961733 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118595010377 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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