Which one do you prefer? Why?
1- A company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or
2- another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days
Some people prefer to have a challenging and interesting job, even if it has less vacation. Others, like a job with more vacation days and fewer challenges. In my opinion, having a job that has more vacation days and is not so challenging is better. That is because of, challenging projects need to a lot of energy that makes you tired and affects your personal life. Moreover, more vacation gives you an opportunity to do some exercise for your health. In addition, getting more relax on vacation guarantees to have a better concentration on your work. My reasons are explained in detail hereunder.
First of all, doing hard activities like challenging projects in a job might make you exhausted. Alternatively stated, when you arrive at home without any energy you can't do your duties as a member of the family. My personal experience is a good example of this. I was working for an electronics company three years ago. I was the master of the research and development section. Developing a website with HTML language in a short period was the duty of our section. We were working hard among days but there wasn't any sign of progress in our work. We were so tired and without energy when we went to our homes. My wife always complains to me because I was so tired to listen to her talk. Also, our intercourse didn't have good quality because I was under the incredible pressure from our projects. Consequently, we have divorced after five years of our marriage. Thus, a challenging job might have an irrecoverable impact on personal life.
As the second reason, exercising is essential for everyone to keep health. In other words, more vacation days give you an appropriate opportunity for doing exercise and consequently keeping your body healthy. For example, my uncle died when he was fifty years old because of a heart attack. I will never forget his doctor statement when he said: "he could be alive for at least ten years more if he was spending more time exercising". I remember that the company which he worked on didn't give him more than a day for vacation. Thus, he hadn't enough time for doing exercise. Therefore, inadequate vacation days might even cause death indirectly.
Finally, if you don't have enough time for getting relax thus you can't concentrate on your work. Put differently, more vacation days is equal to more time for getting relax and consequently more concentration when you are working. My older brother's experience demonstrates that this is true. He is an accountant who works for a startup accelerator company. The company is so busy for a month because of a new project. My brother's boss doesn't let him stay home this month even when all his coworkers are on vacation. He became so tired since he doesn’t have any time for relaxation. Yesterday he made a mistake because he couldn’t concentrate on his work. As a result, it causes a hundred thousand dollar financial loss for the company. Consequently, he must sell his house as compensation for this mistake.
To sum up, tiredness caused by a challenging job could affect your personal life. Also, inadequate vacation days don’t give you enough time for exercising and relaxation that might have irrecoverable effects. These are my reasons for why I prefer a job with more vacations and fewer challenges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, at least, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2755.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 565.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87610619469 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86469895756 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463716814159 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 887.4 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 39.0 20.6003584229 189% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1234689414 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.641025641 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4871794872 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.79487179487 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299487900757 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800260587411 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857574302417 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210217676101 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101093383197 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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