Which one of the following options is a better choice to help you gain confidence when speaking in the classroom the community and the workplace Why Practicing your speech before the presentation Using techniques and methods Learning from others experienc

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Which one of the following options is a better choice to help you gain confidence when speaking in the classroom, the community, and the workplace? Why?
• Practicing your speech before the presentation
• Using techniques and methods
• Learning from others' experiences

Speaking in front of people is one of the most common phobias out there. Although the speaker may have low self-confidence or be anxious, there are several ways to solve this problem and earn to have a good impression on the audience. Some people believe using methods and techniques will be effective, the others believe learning from others’ experiences will be useful. In contrast with these two options, I think that practicing the speech before the presentation is the most effective way and in the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons.
First of all, reviewing before speech let the speaker schedule the time perfectly and know what to do exactly. This practicing designs a clear structure. At least, the speaker can take a few notes about a captivating introduction, the significance of the topic and details about it and a great conclusion. For instance, I am an architecture lecturer. I teach freshman students how to become familiar with the basic elements of design in architecture. After several years of experience, every time before the class starts I review my notes that I took the night before. At the first impression, as I know when and how to speak, this will show them that I am the boss of speech material. Their facial reaction helps me to feel more confident and comfortable with my lecture. This example clearly shows that being prepared is one of the greatest way to gain confident for a speech in front of people.
Another reason that I can highlight about this fact is that being prepared let the speaker be well-spoken. This means speaking clearly and ensuring how to express the words. A great way to achieve fluency in speech is to practice reading out loud before speaking. Sometimes practicing in front of a mirror and listen to the way words said is a good idea. Once the speaker become more confident he can practice reading aloud in front of his friend or family member; the speaker can even graduate to a more difficult text the more comfortable he becomes. The more he practices the more confident he will feel. For instance, once I read an article about the tips of how to have better foreign-speaking. It mentioned that record yourself while practicing. The key is to listen carefully to the playback and see where you can improve. Listen to the way you pronounce words and how your voice sounds. You can then compare it to how the news anchor sounds. As a result, you can speak more fluently which leads to gain more confidence to speak in a foreign language. This example indicates that practice and practice is always effective.
To sum up, because of the perfect time schedule and control over speech resulted from preparation and also improvement of speaking fluency, practicing the speech before the presentation is the best way to enhance confidence for a speech-maker. I think before every speech people should review and practice.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
... others’ experiences will be useful. In contrast with these two options, I think that pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, then, well, while, at least, for instance, i think, in contrast, as a result, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2420.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86921529175 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77849500497 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480885311871 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5122511123 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4285714286 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53571428571 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242395754301 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583148228971 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486239208566 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152373998036 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303942563031 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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