The widespread use of the Internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
Now a days, internet is hand in hand with our daily life. Imaging our lives without internet is next to impossible. We use internet for many reasons, like to search for any information, to connect with people, for entertainment purpose, for education purpose etc. This widespread access to the information improved and influenced our lifestyle in many ways.
First, having information handy through internet made our lives easy. For example, in earlier days when student wants to prepare any paper for his assignment he used to get information from his professors, or from books in library. He used to have a limited access to information which makes research more difficult and under developed. Now, let's think about present situation. Due to internet student can get information about his research from different sources like, from other professors research publications, encyclopedia, other public websites and also from other student paper publications etc. Therefore increase in availability of information makes him knowledgeable and his paper will be completely developed one with required information, experiments and examples.
Second, in earlier days it was difficult to communicate with people who are away from us, for example who stays in another country or city. Now we can communicate with any person around the world in seconds. This made our relationships more strong. Also, it helped people to get jobs in other countries and work for them from our hometown. It helped in building business communication and increased our scope to get a job. Hence, now we have a better career compared to the earlier days.
Third, apart from positive effects internet also have negative influence such as, online frauds, people have information about how to prepare hazardous objects, etc. Hence, chances of people getting influenced with this information is more. We can see many people getting involved in online frauds.
In conclusion, as everything in this world as positive and negative effects same applies to internet. It depends upon the one who is using it. Even though, internet as few disadvantages considering the enormous advantages this can be subsided. Finally, internet had made every individual more knowledgeable, efficient and smart.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, internet is hand in hand with our dail...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, internet is hand in hand with our dail...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'limited access'.
Suggestion: limited access
... from books in library. He used to have a limited access to information which makes research mor...
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Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'effects'' or 'effect's'?
Suggestion: effects'; effect's
...ier days. Third, apart from positive effects internet also have negative influence s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, third, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40395480226 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91956088192 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539548022599 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1260160573 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1739130435 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3913043478 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218404365597 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670355553276 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524057174327 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126276801495 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375011997281 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.