Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, work has played a key role in people's lives. Scholars have tried to find the ways to improve efficiency of workers in the work environment and factors affecting this efficiency. A controversial question regarding efficiency of the workers is that whether it is better that workers do different types of tasks during workday or stick to one task. Although some people might assert that holding a task during the day will able you to complete it with caution, I believe that doing different tasks during a day is better for employees. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the most important reasons supporting my viewpoint.
The first reason to be mentioned is that doing a lot of tasks during day will increase efficiency of the workers. This is because workers who do a number of different tasks will have a higher satisfaction since our mind considers each task as a challenge and tries to solve it and after completing it will consider it as a success and produce the enzymes which are responsible for happiness. More satisfaction will make the workers interested in their job and it will cause to try to complete more tasks which in turn will lead to higher efficiency. Take me as an example, in the days which I have a number of different subjects to work on I show better performance and as a result I am happier in the end of the day and have more enthusiasm for the next days to work better.
Other reason is that during switching tasks our brain rests and thus it can show a higher creativity in each task. During long tasks most of people get bored that is because our brain is involved in the process too much and can not provide creative solutions. However by changing the subject it shows a great activity and creativity which results in better solutions. This is of more importance in artistic tasks that you need high creativity. This is correct in other areas such as engineering the higher you are creativity the more you are successful.
So to sum it up, long tasks during the day make workers bored and decrease their creativity. On the other hand, different tasks heighten the workers satisfaction and efficiency.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 474, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'trying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: trying
...terested in their job and it will cause to try to complete more tasks which in turn wi...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ativity in each task. During long tasks most of people get bored that is because our brain is ...
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Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...ther hand, different tasks heighten the workers satisfaction and efficiency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, so, thus, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72368421053 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71863758245 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452631578947 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7585253066 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.1875 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297517686637 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110043935089 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763630329185 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201160649072 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529812138032 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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