Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Development of technology has led to an increase in the amount and variety of work that has to be done in every company. While some companies take this approach to impose similar tasks over and over on their workers, I believe that doing different tasks would benefit both the workers and companies. This essay will explore the reasons for my perspective in the following paragraphs.
The first reason that contributes to the better effects of taking various responsibilities by workers is that it can help them keep being motivated during the day by giving them the chance of starting a new task instead of continuing the previous boring activity. I think a personal example can shed some light on this statement. A couple of years ago, I worked in an engineering company. There, I was responsible to do the same task of revising another engineer's designs in a day. It was very tedious because I could not do anything meaningful and new during the day. Thus, I was really looking forward to finishing the working hours and leaving the company. If I had had the chance to switch between different tasks, I would have felt much more satisfied with my job and might have stayed in the company longer. Thus, having various tasks to do in a day would be very effective for saving the workers' motivations.
Secondly, doing various tasks would help the workers to save time and be more productive during the day because they can leave the task with poor or no results behind to be done in a better time and go for another task in which they could acquire some accomplishments and feel happier that the whole day was not a waste of time. For example, I am working in another company nowadays. In the new company, I am loaded with so many different tasks and projects. Although I am very busy, I feel far more satisfied with my job because I can divide my daytime to do different tasks, whether I complete the determined amount of work or not, I would leave the task to go and do the other part of another project. This way, I definitely do something useful in a day, which can help me feel more productive. Therefore, being able to do different activities is very useful for the workers' sense of self-satisfaction.
On the whole, taking all the aforementioned reasons into account, I think that the opportunity to do different activities in one day could be very useful. Not only will this approach help the workers to remain motivated all day long but it also could help them to feel more productive and always have the chance to do a good job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...In the new company, I am loaded with so many different tasks and projects. Although I am very ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, i feel, i think, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61810154525 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69120002743 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450331125828 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9027585989 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.105263158 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8421052632 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323032342299 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991378769826 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067588702958 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203016511957 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483883321908 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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