Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Workers has a vital role in a company to be successful among its competitors, thus, the managers always try to pay considerable attention to the satisfaction of their workers. Personally, I do believe that people are more eager to do various duties while they are spending their time in a factory since it will result in excellent consequences. To substantiate this view point, two main reasons are elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, being experienced in a series of different duties, a typical worker has the possibility to search through his own talent and find his main interest. In fact, most of people select their job just because of the situation that they were once in, as a result there is a high possibility that simple workers have talents in other jobs rather than their current one. My father's experience can illustrate this point clearly. As my father finished his military service and got married, he was forced to find a job as soon as possible since he must pay the cost of living. Therefore, he started working as a simple worker in a chemical factory even though his main interest was being a sells person. However, one day he worked instead of one of the workers which was a sells person since that person was fired due to his bad behavior with customers. Working at this new position, my father acknowledged that interacting with other could be interesting since he had an intrinsic talent of treating in a clever way with other. Finally, he found his dreamed job just because of that simple change, and now he is one of the biggest sellers on chemical component in our city.
Secondly, having the chance of learning new techniques can subsequently lead to being a versatile worker which finally increases their salary. Indeed, companies usually pay more money to those workers who have mastered different skills since they can be more useful and beneficial for the company. Knowing this hidden fact, workers are inclined to do various jobs in order be the center of attention of their managers. My brother's life will bring us more information to understand this note. After leaving the school, my brother found a small restaurant to work as a waiter. Even though he was not build for that position, as he mentioned, there was no other better job to found at that time. On the other hand, thanks to the generous manager of that restaurant he has the chance of helping to the chief when the restaurant was crowded. After working for around 2 years, my brother learned how to interact with customers as a waiter and also how to cook delicious Italian food. Consequently, he was promoted to be the main worker of that restaurant and his salary was double after that. In this way, that simple change is his duty was the starting point of being a perfect worker.
In sum, I feel that workers like to have the opportunity to work in various positions doing different duties. This is because they can find their real interest and also because they can augment their income.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...nt and find his main interest. In fact, most of people select their job just because of the si...
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Line 5, column 694, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sells'' or 'sell's'?
Suggestion: sells'; sell's
...en though his main interest was being a sells person. However, one day he worked inst...
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Line 5, column 777, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sells'' or 'sell's'?
Suggestion: sells'; sell's
...stead of one of the workers which was a sells person since that person was fired due ...
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Line 5, column 1005, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a clever way" with adverb for "clever"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... he had an intrinsic talent of treating in a clever way with other. Finally, he found his dream...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... because they can augment their income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as for, i feel, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2502.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 523.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78393881453 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60006887099 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493307839388 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9179338185 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.782608696 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7391304348 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86956521739 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126452345499 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417633472862 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472239855122 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102277111273 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358748093746 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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