Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workdays than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Workers are a large portion of every society and they are the main gear of the industry. if they conduct tactfully, not only entrepreneurs and manufacturers could gain optimum benefit but also they could provide more facilities for their workers and employers. I am of the opinion that workers could be more satisfied if they have many different types of tasks instead of doing similar tasks all day long. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, I should mention that doing a unique task all day long could be boring and made workers reluctant to continue the dedicated task after a while. On the other hand, when workers have many different tasks to do they could have interaction with a variety of things. Hence this issue prevents them to be bored. my personal experience is a compelling example of this issue. I was working in a computer factory as a secretary and all day long I used to punch some papers. It was extremely awful. Every morning I had to go and do a task that was very bored and I could feel that my performance was half of my real performance. Just recently new manager assigns me a variety of tasks to do along with my previous task and vividly I could feel the change in my performance, at least I have not to do a similar task all day long.
Moreover, if workers do a variety of task they can expand their knowledge about a variety of tasks, as we know today’s society needs workers with more than just a specific skill. Therefore if for any reason they get fired they could find another job opportunity as soon as possible. Take me again as an example. In addition to my previous task to do, I have learned how to work with computers and some tools like Microsoft office and so forth.so I have more abilities thereby I have more chances to even hire in new better job opportunities.
In a nutshell, I firmly believe that workers could be more satisfied by doing different types of tasks than they do similar tasks all day long. this is because in this way they do not get to be bored and they could expand their knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, at least, i feel, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50387596899 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53439769657 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478036175711 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.939783007 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49065757898 0.236089414692 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159057925943 0.076458572812 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157062318268 0.0737576698707 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334785156676 0.150856017488 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580390423615 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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