Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We have to work to cope with our live cost. Hence, we need a source to provide money. While a small part of people is so rich, A significant portion of people has an average or lower level of wealthy condition. Therefore they need a job to afford their financial aspects and needs. But a question arises here that should we take a right away a secure job rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying or not? I agree with the statement that if people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than waiting for a job that would be more satisfying. I feel this way for several reasons: if you are waiting to find satisfying job opportunities, it would be somewhat a waste of time, and you may not find such a pleasing chance to meet your criteria.
First of all, as I have mentioned before, waiting for a job that whether meets your satisfaction criteria seems somewhat a waste of time. It looks better, to be frank with yourself. you need money to cope with your daily cost. You should pay for your house rent, your college tuition fee, your food, and so forth. Hence you need the money, and you have no extra time to waste. Although if it seems somehow cautious, opt, but it could provide a secure margin to you that you can afford your life’s cast. Take my friend, John, for instance. He has been searching for more than two years to find a satisfying job opportunity, but he could find such a dream job. Therefore he has not managed to address his financial needs. it results from a waste of time reason.
Moreover, it depends on your expectation criteria, but empirical research shows that often, people could not find their desired job opportunities. So in addition to a waste of time issue, they are missed possible chances by illusion or fiction that finally they could find a satisfactory job. Let’s discuss this from a positive view. They had better take a present job right away, and if they find a satisfactory one, then they could abandon their secure job. Not only they don’t miss any possible opportunity and its comparatively ordinary income, but also they can exploit their time as pleasant as possible.
I should acknowledge that satisfaction job opportunity has its advantages. Nevertheless, I believe that first we had better survive then make progress if it is possible.
In a nutshell, I have talked in the above deliberation on the subject that If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, should they take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying or not? Then I have given some reasons to support my idea that I agree with the presented statement because of a waste of time and the possibility of a lack of such an excellent job opportunity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...While a small part of people is so rich, A significant portion of people has an a...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...ge or lower level of wealthy condition. Therefore they need a job to afford their financi...
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... pleasing chance to meet your criteria. First of all, as I have mentioned before...
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...ooks better, to be frank with yourself. you need money to cope with your daily cost...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...e tuition fee, your food, and so forth. Hence you need the money, and you have no ext...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...ty, but he could find such a dream job. Therefore he has not managed to address his finan...
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...managed to address his financial needs. it results from a waste of time reason. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2292.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62096774194 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63498654718 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439516129032 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 719.1 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8251119416 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1538461538 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511108398247 0.236089414692 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142104172125 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165683241879 0.0737576698707 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30859460523 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17173051391 0.0645574589148 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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