Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
These days, people spend a lot of time working and the way we do it matters. Personally, I think that people prefer jobs that are versatile. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To start with, when workers have many tasks to get done, they are constantly busy, and so their workday goes by fast. On the contrary, if employees are not challenged with many responsibilities, they will feel bored and each of their workdays will seem incredibly long, which is not going to contribute to their well-being. My personal experience is a compelling example of that. I am a pharmacy technician and my job is immensely diversified. While on duty I have to enter new prescriptions in a computer system, count medication, place them in special containers, release drugs to patients, and answer numerous phone calls. In other words, I am continuously busy at work. In this way, I have never felt bored at work, but the intense pace of my job`s routine makes it truly interesting and pleasant for me to work a shift. Not only that but since I have found my position fascinating, I am always in a great mood and able to enjoy my life. That is why I believe that various assignments are beneficial for employees.
Secondly, when workers are challenged with a number of responsibilities, they can learn about them in detail and grow professionally. Society appreciates those who are experienced and knowledgeable. For instance, my head pharmacist is a highly professional woman. During her work day, she consults a myriad of patients and resolves hundreds of claims with insurance companies. Because of her expertise, all my co-workers and I have always asked her for advice if we face any problem at work. We know she has a solution for every issue. Furthermore, our customers truly appreciate her and praise her for excellence and dignity oftentimes. On the other hand, if my supervisor's job had been monotonous and uniform, she could not have been so experienced in her field. To that end, in my opinion, a diversified job can help people to excel.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that being assigned to numerous missions at work is better than doing the same tasks all day long. This is because it is fascinating and rewarding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecause it is fascinating and rewarding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the contrary, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00739937805 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574358974359 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0286316073 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9565217391 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9565217391 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95652173913 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189848209517 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437914509671 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752879116267 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115007525536 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609921719117 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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