would you like to study in tour country or abroad?
Knowledge is one of reasons happiness. Knowledge is human`s experience on that 1000 of years.in fact people can improve their life by wisdom, knowledge and connection.in my opinion educations can help people to catch topics that mentioned above, because educations increase your connection that you face different people, deferent thinking ,different even life.in fact that grow your thinking .actually you are 100 years ahead of you without knowledge. So educations is important activity. some people prefer to study out side their country like me and another people like to study in their country. i think studding abroad has more advantages than inside. The bases for my view are personal, social and Philosophical.
personally, doing a new job and new experience can help me to mature. new experience like studding and living alone in abroad is new challenge to be stronger and better manage your life.one of my friends studies in the England, she said me living in there is different and you can learn new method of life in there that different of Iran like people can live pets easily .you can know different people from another country and learn new thing for example my friend learned to special design on dishes by her Indian person that she could took a job with this activity. You works alone so you have to manage your time, your money, your activity.in fact it cusses you become stronger and more responsible.
From a social perspective, each person have to be useful in sosiall.in fact I decide to come back my country after my educations with Deployment my update knowledge. Actually people that study new since can teach and deployment them and improve their country .on the other hand person who study in good university has better position to work, connection, development and financial that cues your social position is good. You can help your country through this way.
Philosophically- speaking, change people. Humans can influence each other by their knowing. Good infects can change the life direction. i can help persons with my new experience, knowledge, thinking and …..such as my professor in university. His thinking and knowledge cues I know me and find my life direction. I think that`s so good job that a person can understand what do they want in life perhaps this chancing influence on next generation of her or him. this is a big success in my life if I influence on people well that I proud of it.
In conclusion, life places huge demands on us.so we can make a fuller life by experience new and challenging activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97911832947 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73821028311 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482598607889 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 123.214558799 48.9658058833 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 107.3 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.55 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166938633538 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477204815961 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700442274585 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097086464747 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801376304676 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.