writing 22
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, nowadays information is the key ingredient in all human endeavor. we need access to beneficial data in our everyday activities by using internet. it is my firm belief that providing free access to all population is a must for numerous reasons, and i will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, internet allow people to educate themselves, about what is happening around their society. Today’s most of news are broadcasted live on interned. From health news to breaking news, all types of information are available on different websites. Needless to say, people who have access to internet don't need to spend extra money of cable news or other newspapers. if majority of population have access to the internet they will understand and manage information from around the world. I have to admit that my position to this matter have been profoundly influenced by my family experience. I was born in remote area, where to get the information was not easy for people in our neighborhood. The cable news was not active. my father tried had to purchase the internet and we became connected with the world. people in our area could come home to contact their family members just by using email and videocall, and my father support them by updating with the breaking news. if the internet was free many people would make some progress base on the information from the websites.
Second, internet is essential in young people’s education. All school need great connection to help their students to achieves the high standard of education. Plus, students and parents need free access to internet in order to stay focused on their studies and have access to online libraries that can helps young people to lean and work on their school tasks. Drawing from my experience, as I said in first paragraph, we didn't have the internet when I grow up, it was hard to do my homework and I could just wait to go back to school to ask most of data needed to finish my work. However, today all students have access to free connection in my village. The teacher can contact the parents on video call remotely. this help parents and teacher to keep communication and help their children to succeed. having free internet is very best tool top advance the education of our children.
To sum up, I strongly think that the authorities must provide the free internet for every habitant because, it emboldens them to have access to information and also facilitates the excellent education in school and after school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91395348837 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66674835372 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502325581395 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9696896475 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8695652174 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6956521739 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69565217391 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188333054398 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597461523912 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444355767363 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125896478405 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240998966353 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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