You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live. What is the one thing you will do to improve your community? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
The Globalization forced the communities around the world to change their habits, such as the way of they buy clothes, the pathway of children education and the alimentary personal approach. The advent of transgenic food afforded most part of countries to develop the economy. However, the price pays by society for pesticides, synthetic fertilizes and herbicides, used on crops farmers are overwhelming. Due to this, I would probably decide to make a community agriculture, to provide health, fresh food, and hopefully built a better society for all.
The rising of populations on Earth have leaving the planet to a food crisis. Attempting to this, around 2000s, the governments began a movement knew as Green Revolution. Which was basically an extreme search for ways to improve the production of food.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 43.0788530466 12% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 1977.66487455 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 129.0 407.700716846 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25581395349 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 4.48103885553 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95052650119 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 212.727598566 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713178294574 0.524837075471 136% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 618.680645161 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3280291593 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8571428571 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0659707505905 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261260492779 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195425164395 0.0737576698707 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048821979776 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00773771912722 0.0645574589148 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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