You have long been friends with someone. If they do something that you don’t like, should you still be friends with them
Without a shadow of a doubt, establishing friendships and communicating with others is one of the pivotal aspects of humans' distinctive nature. An unanswered question in this area is whether to continue a relationship in which ones' partner has made an unfavorable mistake. Despite all the arguments asserting that breaking up with friends who have done something not appealing to us is an efficient approach, I believe otherwise, maintaining that trying to forget about whatever has happened and making endeavors in order to retain the friendship has advantageous implications on promoting both humans' mental and characteristics. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through two compelling reasons.
First and foremost, The reconciliation ability substantially impacts individuals' dominant lifestyle through teaching them how to control the quality of the relations they make. To put it more simply, regarding mankinds' inherent, which is the need to communicate with other people and shy away from loneliness; therefore, people form relationships with different people in every single stage of their lives. In addition, not all characteristics look like each other this means that all the individuals have different personalities accompanied by their various interests and beliefs, which seeds he plant of conflict. As a result, getting along with others and being aware of these differences precludes humans' from being annoyed by others' actions and behaviors. As it is evident, compromising in friendships, especially when one side does something that it does not match with the other ones' mindset, improves indispensable social skills. My experience is a compelling example of this. I remember getting mad at one of my friends due to her behavior when we were outdoor. However, I eventually realized being upset about someone elses' reactions which make them happy, has nothing to do with
me, and then I tried to get along with it. Hence, it helped me to start comprehending the genuine way of communication.
Another reason to be mentioned is that informing our friends of the things we do not enjoy can be a more rational way, rather than ending the relationship. In fact, sometimes, a friend of ours might not be aware of a specific action that bothers us and do it unintentionally. In such a case, not persevering in the friendship can just hurt both persons involved in it and separate people who might really bond with each other. As a result, talking about the matter and solving it together not only does save an excellent relation but also helps it improve and get much better than it was previously. On the contrary, breaking up with your friend has another consequence, that is, if they do not know their wrong behavior, they will keep this delinquency with them. Hence, that person will not be able to make long-lasting friendships and will be hurt. It is clear to see why finishing the friendship is not the best option.
Reflecting all reasons mentioned above, one soon realizes that the advantages of keeping the friendship and trying to work things out with one another weigh its disadvantages on the grounds that first, it helps to boost a helpful skill for life, and second, can improve the quality of a relationship instead of collapsing it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...her to continue a relationship in which ones partner has made an unfavorable mistake...
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Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'plants'.
Suggestion: plants
...s interests and beliefs, which seeds he plant of conflict. As a result, getting along...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 549, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improves'?
Suggestion: improves
...an excellent relation but also helps it improve and get much better than it was previou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, really, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, in addition, in fact, talking about, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2765.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 536.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15858208955 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04876949037 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 837.0 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5163930785 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.666666667 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5238095238 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47619047619 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219404955462 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610281362009 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058675838453 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107467319334 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683442133406 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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