Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
The above statement states that young people enjoy life more than older people do. Yes, I agree with this statement due to several reasons which I will explain in the following parts of the essay.
To begin with young people have more energy in their body than older people. To enjoy having lot of energy is must without it a person cannot enjoy and experience things in life in a better way. Due to high amount of energy in their body young people can do those works which older people can't do as with increasing age, body energy starts depleting as well. For example young people can travel to many places where older people can't travel themselves and do adventure games like trekking, mountain climbing, sea surfing and so on just because they have higher body energy than older people. Therefore, due to high amount of body energy young people enjoy life better than old people.
Additionally, it can be said that the reason old people cannot enjoy life more than young people is because of age related diseases that increases their suffering. Age related disease such as diabetes, body pain, vision weakness et cetera makes their life less enjoyable as they cannot do those things which they like to do just because of these problems. For example my friend's grandfather likes to eat sweets and play volleyball when he was young but as he got old, he suffered from diabetes and body pain which makes him incapable of playing and eat sweets anymore. Therefore, age related problems(disease) makes older people life less enjoyable than younger people.
Finally, it can be said that old people have experienced almost everything in their life, they have also experience lose of loved one but there is many things which young people left to experience in their lives and it is best stated that first experience is the best experience so this makes the life of young ones more enjoyable than life of older ones.
Therefor, it is plausible to say that young people enjoy life more than old people due to the well articulated reasons provided above.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e can do those works which older people cant do as with increasing age, body energy ...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ravel to many places where older people cant travel themselves and do adventure game...
^^^^
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
...verything in their life, they have also experience lose of loved one but there is many thi...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are many things'?
Suggestion: there are many things
...e also experience lose of loved one but there is many things which young people left to experience i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81073446328 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29439229675 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440677966102 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9492135742 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.603735279567 0.236089414692 256% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.301531248038 0.076458572812 394% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202786111174 0.0737576698707 275% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.420820144137 0.150856017488 279% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662617339355 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e can do those works which older people cant do as with increasing age, body energy ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ravel to many places where older people cant travel themselves and do adventure game...
^^^^
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
...verything in their life, they have also experience lose of loved one but there is many thi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are many things'?
Suggestion: there are many things
...e also experience lose of loved one but there is many things which young people left to experience i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81073446328 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29439229675 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440677966102 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9492135742 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.603735279567 0.236089414692 256% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.301531248038 0.076458572812 394% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202786111174 0.0737576698707 275% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.420820144137 0.150856017488 279% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662617339355 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.