Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Society is the sum-up of humans and their relation with each other and their communities inside. In other words, the term of society finds meaning with its connections and this is the main and vital purpose. In this lecture we are going to discuss this statement: Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities, and I agree with this. I have three potential reasons; I will try to convince you.
First of all, I cannot tell this is the youth's fault that they do not help their communities because I believe they have a busy life full of stress. Young people have lots of challenges in their life such as economic problems which prevent them to pay attention to other things. For example, I myself had the same situation in the past. I had to work full-time because I wanted to become independent from my family so I devote my whole life in that way and nothing was worthwhile for me in that period of time. So, that’s why circumstances make changes in our priorities.
As a second reason, maybe young people nowadays are not interested in helping their communities. Since there are lots of changes in people's behavior and needs and interests, so that is so logical and rational people's interests changed a lot. If I want to explain more, I can say with an example. While I was 18 years old most people were willing to help their communities and it became part of our culture, so it was like a duty for everyone. As 10 years past since then, many things changed in our culture that no one cares about those things even me while I was very eager to participate and help.
The last but not least, I think the government has to take their responsibilities too. They have to stimulate young people in different ways. They are several ways to convince and make young ones willing to help and take part in communities and associations. For instance, by holding different and exciting programs and seminars, it would be really stimulating.
In conclusion, as I mentioned above not giving enough time to help communities it is not just because of young people's lack of attention, it is also about being so busy and their priorities and interests. To increase their keenness, we have to modify and alter somethings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66161616162 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65129869246 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6593632569 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440571314302 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115615727938 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125984068256 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248501600424 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761462597774 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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