Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days people have many things to do in their life. Most people regardless of improved facilities are too busy and sometimes cannot find a way to handle all of them. Most of the time you have just finish and check it as done and the quality of doing things are not important. Actually, it is not your fault that you cannot do very well since you have lots to do. There is a big problem since humans are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. In this essay, I am going to explain three potential reasons supporting my opinion.
First of all, according to different and many staff to do in a day, it is really hard to have enough concentration to do great. Concentration is an important factor in doing well and raising quality. For better understanding, just think about the years you were a student. You had to do homework at home, in days you were too busy you just wanted to finish them. You did not get what was the purpose of that homework and you did not pay too much attention to doing well.
Secondly, an absolute thing in these circumstances is that we have finite time. What would you do when you have limited time in doing things on time and there is no obligation to do well? The answer is that we will decrease the quality and keep watching to finish our duties. For example, according to statics that we achieved in the test we took in our company, we found that on busy days the efficiency was lower in comparison with other days. Therefore, time is significant in doing well.
Finally, I believe that people have talent and ability in different areas. It is much better for them to follow their interests and avoid doing every activity. Most people who do various activities without any interest and sometimes with imitating from others cannot meet their desires. In other words, for the purpose of being successful in their work, it is necessary for persons to discover their talents and to assign their time, energy, and efforts to do their interesting job.
To sum up, in my point of view, being busy doing diverse things will waste your time and energy and you cannot be successful in all areas. So, it is better to focus on one thing to do well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 422, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... problem since humans are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4776119403 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38870741631 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477611940299 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8699441394 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8181818182 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449434721995 0.236089414692 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152630867165 0.076458572812 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112546062149 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26792576823 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110904501162 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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