Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records. Which approach do you prefer, and why?
Ancient people have used different ways to record their daily life or experiences like painting on the caves' walls or engraving
on stones. By keeping this kind of experiences they can convey lots of information to the next generations. Nowadays people
also keep their memories and experiences in various ways. With the growth of technology people also are interested in keeping
and sharing their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. But in my own life, I
prefer not to share such records on the social platform. In this essay, I am going to explain my reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, I prefer to preserve my privacy. As people share everything on the internet about their memories, they put their lives
in front of others' sight. When you become public to people, others will talk and judge more about you intentionally or maybe
unconsciously. As I am an introverted person in my life, I will suffer that people know everything about me. I think it would be
better for me and people who have a similar style of life to keep their distance from social networks. And privacy is the most
important thing in everyone's life to have a healthy life mentally and emotionally.
Secondly, I believe that sharing information will influence others in both good and bad ways, but mostly in the wrong way.
Since people are tended to follow others which they see around them without questioning them, it would be better not to share
personal records. Personal things that people experience might be good only for themselves but not for other people. For
example, I experienced the same thing in my life. When I was a teenager, I always wanted to travel on my own and my parents
did not allow me. When I see other people who traveled with their friends, I became depressed and isolated. The thing that we
could not see in the pictures that people share, is the circumstances behind them. We usually do not know about their family
structures and just judge their appearance of life with our inside life.
To sum up, as I mentioned above, I know there are advantages and disadvantages come along but the disadvantages
outweighed. Comparing our lives with others, influencing people, and preserve your privacy is just one of those disadvantages I
could explain in my essay.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, i think, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91457286432 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7777719979 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510050251256 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9613042451 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.53405017921 441% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329673805444 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972149741389 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874647797458 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951670058617 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774451463929 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, i think, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91457286432 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7777719979 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510050251256 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9613042451 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.53405017921 441% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329673805444 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972149741389 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874647797458 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951670058617 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774451463929 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.