Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Now a day, technology is one of the most important parts of our life. Technology is very useful and has positive effects on human's life. Since scientists invent many devices, the internet and other things they opened a new window to the human. The internet is one of the remarkable and striking inventions. Some people, including me, believe that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information and others think access to so much information just by clicks creates problems. In this essay, I am going to explain three reasons to indicate my arguments.
First of all, all of us want to educate in the best universities and schools with the best professors and it is not possible for everyone to afford it. After the whole internet access to the whole world, it brings us an opportunity to participate in courses with those brilliant professors. For example, when I graduated from high school, my goal was to enter Harvard University, but because of some situations like economic and be far from home, prohibited me from going there. But now a day student, miles away, could participate in their classes without a physical presence.
Secondly, another important thing in today's life is that being up to date. many years ago, people didn't know and hear about what happens in their country even in their city, it is because of the lack of strong communication. For instance, my father always said that today if something happens on the other side of the earth, we will inform in just a second with the internet. That is why I believe that the internet brings us the best and newest information.
Finally, with the help of the internet, people can be in touch with others in the same field. Maybe you have experienced that when you are the one to solve the problem or handle the project you had to produce ideas and steps to solve it. But some problems need to group thinking because maybe you never think about other easier and affordable solutions which makes your project more profitable. You can connect to other engineers and students and who has expertise in that field to get advice from them.
In short, what I said above, those reasons are just minor benefits and advantages we get from the internet. We could do anything and obtain information in all fields just by open the computer and enter the websites. In my opinion, it is up to you how to use and utilize the internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Suggestion: Many
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in short, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72684085511 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54507272688 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546318289786 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6331663464 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7619047619 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0476190476 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333840115391 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825493632996 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121749951927 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16313975268 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892942112375 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.