younger people enjoy life better than older people do.
There is no shortage of debate on the topic that whether the young people enjoy life more or the older people. In my opinion, the younger people enjoy better than the aged. I feel this for mainly two reasons which I will explore in my further essay.
Firstly, according to many studies and my personal obersvations, younger people are more energatic than the older people. This is one of the main factor which accounts for the enthusiastic exploration which young people are ready to take given the opportunity. My personal expereince is a compelling example for this. Once during my colllege days, me and my friends were randomly discussing about good hill-stations. The topic instigated us so much that we ended up going for a trip to the nearest hill-station next day, with the limited amount of resources we had. Now, when I look back at that time, I feel amazing about it because it was one of the most exciting trip I ever had. I believe, had I have been more mature, I would not have taken that decision and would have lost an amazing oppotunity to travel and explore. Thus, for this reason I feel young people enjoy life in a better way.
Secondly, with the passage of time people get more responsibilities to takcle. These responsibilities makes us more worrisome and less enjoyble. Thus, the younger you are, the lesser responsibilites you have and the more enjoyment the young fellow can get. For instance, consider a family of father, mother and a kid planning for a vacation trip. It will be the kid who will be most excited and will enjoy the most. On the other hand, the father and the mother will be taking care of the finances, completing their office and house chores before leaving. Even during the trip, there might be some responsibilites which they will keep persuing.
However, with time everyone gets to know what activity is more enjoyable to them. Thus, for someone travelling the world can be enjoyable, at the same time, for someone else sitting and playing with his pet can be enjoyable. Time should not be limit which can dictate the amount of enjoyability one can have in their lifetime.
In conclusion, I will bolster the statement that young people enjoy the life in a better way. I have mainly two reasons to support my argument. The more energy which young generation have and the less responsibilities which younger people have as compared to the older people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'make'.
Suggestion: make
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Line 13, column 101, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'travels'.
Suggestion: travels
...re enjoyable to them. Thus, for someone travelling the world can be enjoyable, at the same...
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Line 17, column 197, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun responsibilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78229665072 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66797471887 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497607655502 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9631428685 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2916666667 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261317932906 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936259708669 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135766959947 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195620912592 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134657533893 0.0645574589148 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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